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Running Towards Death
Meeting For the First Time
As I walked towards my new apartment, I realized I wasn’t in Chicago anymore. These houses were very clean, proper, and precise. Chicago had lots of sewers, rats, broken windows, and graffiti. All of my belongs were moved into my apartment yesterday and now I could finally get settled.
“Um miss?”
I turned around to find a 5’9 guy with tattoos, long black hair, snakebites and a nose ring. He looked about 25.
“Yes?”
“You dropped your phone going up the steps, I figured I’d bring it back to you” he said.
I smiled. “Thank you, most people would’ve just kept it”
He smiled back. “Nah, I have my own. I’m Max. Max Green”
“I’m Emily Brennar. Or just Emily”
He looked so familiar…
“Nice to meet you, you new around here?” he asked.
“Yep, just moved from Chicago. You live in this apartment complex?”
“Chicago, I played a show there before. So many people. And yeah, I live in apartment 11A.
“Are you in a band? You really look familiar. And cool, I live in 10A” I said.
“Escape the Fate?” he smirked.
I gasped. “Y-your M-max Green”
He laughed. “I know, I just told you”
I blushed. “Sorry, I don’t meet bass players from one my favorite bands everyday”
“Favorite?”
“Yeah, you guys are great” I said.
As he smiled back, another guy who looked much younger with brownish black hair, tattoos, about 5’11 and a nose ring walked up the stairs.
“That’s Jacky Vincent, ignore him. He’s a prick. But a quiet one” Max whispered.
“Ello Maxwell, how are you? Who might this lovely lady be?” this guy Jacky said in a British accent. He smiled at me.
He had fangs…
“E-emily” I stuttered. This guy was gorgeous. His snow white skin and his perfect teeth and his bright blue/green eyes.
“Do I make you nervous?” he smirked and stepped forward. I stepped back.
“Jacky, just get out of here” Max said and pushed him back. Jacky grabbed his arm so fast...faster than anything and stopped him.
“Get. Your. Hand. Off. Me” Max said through gritted teeth.
I was honestly scared. Jacky’s eyes started changing and then he relaxed. He let go of Max and stormed off into his apartment. 9A. Great.
“What was that about?” I said.
“Nothing. He’s crazy. I guess you could say” Max said.
“He seems…intimidating” I said.
“Towards humans he is…shit…I shouldn’t have said that. Forget I said that” Max said and looked away.
“Huh?”
“Forget it, Emily. He’s nothing. I have to go, I put my number in your phone. I’ll text you later” he said and smiled.
“Alright, see you later” I smiled.
When I walked back into my apartment, a male figure was standing in my room in the dark.
“Don’t be scared, I’m not crazy…”
“Um miss?”
I turned around to find a 5’9 guy with tattoos, long black hair, snakebites and a nose ring. He looked about 25.
“Yes?”
“You dropped your phone going up the steps, I figured I’d bring it back to you” he said.
I smiled. “Thank you, most people would’ve just kept it”
He smiled back. “Nah, I have my own. I’m Max. Max Green”
“I’m Emily Brennar. Or just Emily”
He looked so familiar…
“Nice to meet you, you new around here?” he asked.
“Yep, just moved from Chicago. You live in this apartment complex?”
“Chicago, I played a show there before. So many people. And yeah, I live in apartment 11A.
“Are you in a band? You really look familiar. And cool, I live in 10A” I said.
“Escape the Fate?” he smirked.
I gasped. “Y-your M-max Green”
He laughed. “I know, I just told you”
I blushed. “Sorry, I don’t meet bass players from one my favorite bands everyday”
“Favorite?”
“Yeah, you guys are great” I said.
As he smiled back, another guy who looked much younger with brownish black hair, tattoos, about 5’11 and a nose ring walked up the stairs.
“That’s Jacky Vincent, ignore him. He’s a prick. But a quiet one” Max whispered.
“Ello Maxwell, how are you? Who might this lovely lady be?” this guy Jacky said in a British accent. He smiled at me.
He had fangs…
“E-emily” I stuttered. This guy was gorgeous. His snow white skin and his perfect teeth and his bright blue/green eyes.
“Do I make you nervous?” he smirked and stepped forward. I stepped back.
“Jacky, just get out of here” Max said and pushed him back. Jacky grabbed his arm so fast...faster than anything and stopped him.
“Get. Your. Hand. Off. Me” Max said through gritted teeth.
I was honestly scared. Jacky’s eyes started changing and then he relaxed. He let go of Max and stormed off into his apartment. 9A. Great.
“What was that about?” I said.
“Nothing. He’s crazy. I guess you could say” Max said.
“He seems…intimidating” I said.
“Towards humans he is…shit…I shouldn’t have said that. Forget I said that” Max said and looked away.
“Huh?”
“Forget it, Emily. He’s nothing. I have to go, I put my number in your phone. I’ll text you later” he said and smiled.
“Alright, see you later” I smiled.
When I walked back into my apartment, a male figure was standing in my room in the dark.
“Don’t be scared, I’m not crazy…”
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