Broken and Defeated

Okay, I finally have a sort of storyline.

Sheena has been abused and bullied into thinking she's worthless all her life. Her parents ignore her and her boyfriend Gerard (not Gerard Way) beats her. She puts up with it because she believes that she doesn't deserve better and because she doesn't want to be alone.

What will happen when it all gets too much?
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Okay, so I don't demand that you comment but it would be nice :]

Please let me know how I can improve and give me some ideas on how to make it more interesting :] x