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The Creeper and His Nightmares

I am not going to post a proper summary yet, but I will give a quick 1 2 3 about how the story is written. It is a first person narrative written through the eyes and emotions of Charlotte Sullivan. She is an extraordinary tattoo artist, with a dark attitude and comfortable view of life. Her mind has slowly become twisted on the figure that haunts her dreams; a strange man with an uncurling grin that always appears to be blood soaked. She feels as though she can't escape his grasp, that he contains some terrible and unnatural evil. Through dreams, her emotions, and the mans secret darkness i will try to reveal something more than another journey between a woman and a man. Charlotte is a mixture of the sensitivity that my best friend and I hold, the darkness which is open within our minds, and the creativity that is to behold a story with true trial. Humph, I guess this did turn out to be a pretty proper summary XD.
  1. The First Nightmare
    We are introduced to the man within the mind, Charlotte yet to be known.