Status: A better rewrite of 'I Don't Fear The Boogeyman'
You Don't Fear The Boogeyman? You Should
Chapter 2:
(Melody)
. Jackson was on his hands and knees trying to stay clam. As the ice crack beneath him.
“ Stay there Melody.”
Storm took a steep on to the ice. It began to crack under my sibling's feet.
“ Storm what you doing?” I was freaking out
“ It doesn't matter if I fall in. Jackson life is all that matters.”
Storm made it across the lake. With each step the ice would crack. She got so close than stop. I called out, “ What you going to do now?” Storm looked at me clam and cool as the snow on the bank.
“ Storm you get any closer well both fall in. The ice super thin.”
“ I know buddy stay clam you'll be okay.”
“ What about you?”
“ Don't worry about me.”
I was scared I didn't want to lose either sibling. My body was went stiff I was biting my lip. If I lose them both how would I explain this mom and dad? I couldn't live with my self. So I tugged at my hair.
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(Jackson)
“ Storm I don't want to fall through the ice.” I squawked. looking up at my sister. My heart racing and only getting faster. I try to stay clam.
“ Your not going to fall in." Storm reassured me. I can't Believe how storm can keep cool under presser.
I began to sink I mad a small sound. Storm held a hand out to me. Told me what the plan was. “ Jackson on the count of three. Take my hand I'll pull you.”
“ What?! The ice will crack under you, You'll go right through!” I protested.
“ If I fall in fine!”
I did what Storm wanted. Counted three I grabbed her hand, but we both went through the ice.
Melody screamed in horror.
I jolted upright in bed, tugging at my shirt gasping for air. I peered around my room. Nothing, but pure darkness.
My heart rate slowed down. I began to relax.
Couldn't help it. I rolled out of bed went to check on my sisters. I went to Melody's room first. She was in bed fast asleep. I saw something I never saw before.
Gold sand formed into stars above my sisters head. I got to say was cool.
I went to Storms room. She was also fast asleep. Above her head snow flakes made of golden sand danced.
Knowing that my siblings were okay I decided to go back to my room.
The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end. Something wasn't right. I felt like someone was watching me.
I shook the feeling away head back to my room. Once I got there lie down, I heard a nightmarish laugh. I sat up again.
In a frighting whisper I said, "Pitch."
. Jackson was on his hands and knees trying to stay clam. As the ice crack beneath him.
“ Stay there Melody.”
Storm took a steep on to the ice. It began to crack under my sibling's feet.
“ Storm what you doing?” I was freaking out
“ It doesn't matter if I fall in. Jackson life is all that matters.”
Storm made it across the lake. With each step the ice would crack. She got so close than stop. I called out, “ What you going to do now?” Storm looked at me clam and cool as the snow on the bank.
“ Storm you get any closer well both fall in. The ice super thin.”
“ I know buddy stay clam you'll be okay.”
“ What about you?”
“ Don't worry about me.”
I was scared I didn't want to lose either sibling. My body was went stiff I was biting my lip. If I lose them both how would I explain this mom and dad? I couldn't live with my self. So I tugged at my hair.
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(Jackson)
“ Storm I don't want to fall through the ice.” I squawked. looking up at my sister. My heart racing and only getting faster. I try to stay clam.
“ Your not going to fall in." Storm reassured me. I can't Believe how storm can keep cool under presser.
I began to sink I mad a small sound. Storm held a hand out to me. Told me what the plan was. “ Jackson on the count of three. Take my hand I'll pull you.”
“ What?! The ice will crack under you, You'll go right through!” I protested.
“ If I fall in fine!”
I did what Storm wanted. Counted three I grabbed her hand, but we both went through the ice.
Melody screamed in horror.
I jolted upright in bed, tugging at my shirt gasping for air. I peered around my room. Nothing, but pure darkness.
My heart rate slowed down. I began to relax.
Couldn't help it. I rolled out of bed went to check on my sisters. I went to Melody's room first. She was in bed fast asleep. I saw something I never saw before.
Gold sand formed into stars above my sisters head. I got to say was cool.
I went to Storms room. She was also fast asleep. Above her head snow flakes made of golden sand danced.
Knowing that my siblings were okay I decided to go back to my room.
The hairs on the back of my neck stood on end. Something wasn't right. I felt like someone was watching me.
I shook the feeling away head back to my room. Once I got there lie down, I heard a nightmarish laugh. I sat up again.
In a frighting whisper I said, "Pitch."