Captive

I'm not very good with summaries, but here goes.

Captive is a first-person fiction told by Bonnie, a sixteen year old high school student that's looking for love. She's got a pretty level head, but common sense tends to fly out the window when it comes to Trevor, her crush. She admits that she's only attracted to him on a physical level, and she realizes that what she feels is far from love. Still, she finds herself making some stupid decisions for a boy that can't be trusted. She needs to just walk away, but the fact that she keeps giving him the benefit of the doubt is what puts her in danger later on.

(I don't write a lot of original stories, so please please PLEASE let me know if I'm doing well or if you have suggestions...whatever. Feedback is encouraged. Strongly.)