Status: this is part of my uni portfolio. Would appreciate feedback

Amy

‘Amy?’

There was silence at the end of the line. I realised I must have reached her voicemail.

‘Okay I know you’re listening, and I don’t have much time. I’ve done bad. I’m sorry. So sorry. You might get police around but-‘ I could see the first of the police cars rounding the corner. I had mere seconds left. ‘I’m sorry and I love you and please don’t-‘

This is part of my uni portfolio, so I would really appreciate some feedback. Hope you enjoy =]
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