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Surviving the Abyss

The time is 2045, with the introduction of many Homeless Prevention Centers or "HPCs", the United States is now on its way to becoming one of the cleanest places on the face of the planet. Kai is a troubled youth with a habit of needing to have everything under his control. One day after arriving home from school he notices a trail of blood leading to his two year old brothers room. How will he react when the daily aspects of life he took for naught vanish leaving him powerless in a cruel world with no allies?
  1. Chapter 1: Kai Roswell
    The first chapter. It's more of a prologue of whats to come more than anything else.