What a Wonderful Caricature of Intimacy
"I need to think about it."
I was still on Brendon's porch. I was crying, my breath coming out in loud bursts. All I could feel was pain. Not physical pain, but emotional pain.
I heard the door open.
"Jenny," said Brendon. "You need to go. You can't stay here."
I let out a sob. I didn't know where to go. I stayed where I was.
I felt a hand wrap around my arm. I pulled my arm away from the hand.
I heard a sigh.
"Jenny," Brendon said again. "Go home."
Home. That's where I could go. I got up slowly and grabbed a hold of the railing on the porch to steady myself. I did this without looking at Brendon. I didn't want to see him. I stumbled down the two steps connected to the porch and rushed to my car, trying not to trip. But I had no luck. I tripped a few feet away from my car, landing on my hands and knees. I stayed there for a moment before getting back up and closing the gap between me and my car. I got in and started my car quickly, backing out of Brendon's driveway as fast as I could. I had to stop my car a little ways away though. I was still crying and it was hard to see.
When I came to a stop, all I could do was cry and clutch at my chest. I was in so much pain. It was all my fault. I wish I had known Ryan's true feelings before hurting someone who actually loved me.
I was suddenly interrupted by knocking on my window.
"Go away Brendon," I managed to say. I let out a sob. Brendon knocked on my window again. "Bren--!"
I stopped what I was saying as soon as I looked up and saw who it really was. It was Ryan. I just stared at him.
"Open the door," Ryan said. I didn't move. "Please?"
I slowly opened my door. When it was open, Ryan kneeled down next to me. His hand instantly went to my face, wiping away my tears. I realized I had stopped crying. It probably had something to do with Ryan being there. It had surprised me so much.
"What are you doing here?" I finally asked.
"I need to tell you something," Ryan said. "You left before I even had a chance to reply to what you said."
"I think your reaction was a clear enough reply," I spat.
"Well it wasn't," Ryan said. "I had to think about my answer."
"You shouldn't have to think about whether or not you love me," I said.
"Well, I did," Ryan said. "Our entire relationship has been based on my revenge. All I've been thinking about is my revenge. I had to think about times when we weren't dealing with my plan."
"So, what?" I said.
"I love you," Ryan said, reaching up and placing his hands on either side of my face. I couldn't say anything now. I didn't know what to say.
"Jenny," Ryan said. "Please say something. I'm so sorry I hurt you earlier.. I didn't mean to. I really truly love you."
I placed my hands on top of Ryan's. I stared into his eyes for a moment before I pulled his hands off of my face.
"I need to think about it," I said quietly. "Can I come see you tomorrow night?"
"Yeah," Ryan said, smiling. He stood up. "Of course."
"Ok," I said. "I'll see you tomorrow."
I heard the door open.
"Jenny," said Brendon. "You need to go. You can't stay here."
I let out a sob. I didn't know where to go. I stayed where I was.
I felt a hand wrap around my arm. I pulled my arm away from the hand.
I heard a sigh.
"Jenny," Brendon said again. "Go home."
Home. That's where I could go. I got up slowly and grabbed a hold of the railing on the porch to steady myself. I did this without looking at Brendon. I didn't want to see him. I stumbled down the two steps connected to the porch and rushed to my car, trying not to trip. But I had no luck. I tripped a few feet away from my car, landing on my hands and knees. I stayed there for a moment before getting back up and closing the gap between me and my car. I got in and started my car quickly, backing out of Brendon's driveway as fast as I could. I had to stop my car a little ways away though. I was still crying and it was hard to see.
When I came to a stop, all I could do was cry and clutch at my chest. I was in so much pain. It was all my fault. I wish I had known Ryan's true feelings before hurting someone who actually loved me.
I was suddenly interrupted by knocking on my window.
"Go away Brendon," I managed to say. I let out a sob. Brendon knocked on my window again. "Bren--!"
I stopped what I was saying as soon as I looked up and saw who it really was. It was Ryan. I just stared at him.
"Open the door," Ryan said. I didn't move. "Please?"
I slowly opened my door. When it was open, Ryan kneeled down next to me. His hand instantly went to my face, wiping away my tears. I realized I had stopped crying. It probably had something to do with Ryan being there. It had surprised me so much.
"What are you doing here?" I finally asked.
"I need to tell you something," Ryan said. "You left before I even had a chance to reply to what you said."
"I think your reaction was a clear enough reply," I spat.
"Well it wasn't," Ryan said. "I had to think about my answer."
"You shouldn't have to think about whether or not you love me," I said.
"Well, I did," Ryan said. "Our entire relationship has been based on my revenge. All I've been thinking about is my revenge. I had to think about times when we weren't dealing with my plan."
"So, what?" I said.
"I love you," Ryan said, reaching up and placing his hands on either side of my face. I couldn't say anything now. I didn't know what to say.
"Jenny," Ryan said. "Please say something. I'm so sorry I hurt you earlier.. I didn't mean to. I really truly love you."
I placed my hands on top of Ryan's. I stared into his eyes for a moment before I pulled his hands off of my face.
"I need to think about it," I said quietly. "Can I come see you tomorrow night?"
"Yeah," Ryan said, smiling. He stood up. "Of course."
"Ok," I said. "I'll see you tomorrow."
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So, I would have updated sooner, but ClickI think the original update was better, but there's nothing I can do about it ]:
Anyways, I don't think this story needs to go on for much longer. I was expecting this to last a bit longer, but everything is gonna be resolved, so yeah...
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~Sally