A Tale of Two Cities

♥okay, this is my first story
♥♥and it may not be too good....
♥♥♥but i try and i luv to write and thats the only thing that matters right?
♥♥♥♥this is a tale about a women
♥♥♥♥♥her husband is the monster that terrifies her
♥♥♥♥♥♥her brother is the one that can save her
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥or will there be another?
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥only time will tell
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥in this sad tale of tradgedy and love

comments are apreciated (SP?????) as not only do they help me improve on my writing skills but also put a smile on my face :D