Brian Harold May - Hero? - Comments

He's a complete legend :) And my guitar teacher's hero :D

I like how this article focuses mainly on his life outside of Queen, something most people are not familiar with; the subject matter gives the article the opportunity to educate many readers. Your strong points include your writing style and voice, which was overall very engaging, as well as your mechanics. One area I see that could use improvement is your organization. You had so many great facts, but at times they seemed to be placed in paragraphs where they didn't belong. Overall, this was an awesome article and we're so happy you entered the contest with it =]

I've always loved Queen and I have even more respect for Brian now. I always saw him as a brilliant musician, but I was never aware of his true intelligence or the depression he experienced. I love this. Great article.

Loved this article- I didn't know half of the stuff in here about him!

Great artical, I didn't know alot of this stuff about him!

Mm, this was definitely informative. I didn't know half of it (I only knew a very little - I'm a big Queen fan, but I didn't even recognize the name) (well, I didn't remember wherefrom, at least).
I like the way You've written this, though I'm not really too fond of the part where you suddenly start using "I". I think it might have worked better, if you had kept generalizing.
But. Good work!