Its understandable. You mentioned before you new several sites that offered and related to information on aviation crashes, would you mind sending me the information?
This was an essay I was asked to do in middle school, so there really wasn't any real background information on it except for the information given to me on several goverment sites and interveiw I had conducted on several airplane mechanics and specialist that I knew, so it isn't exactly my best work. However I do have the updated version of this essay/report which I redid in 10th due to the fact that I realized it was missing alot of information, sadly I haven't had much time to ask my old science teacher to give me a copy of the report I handed into her since she is currently using it to demostrate how to complete a well don report.
Fair attempt but you haven't looked at any of the theories of human error in error promoting conditions. There is so much literature on this. It's all very well and good looking at the statistics and blaming front line staff but you really need to look at the bigger picture. You haven't explained how or why these occur but just...said that they occur.