My Chemical Romance : Saviors? [Speech] - Comments

Don't think "helena" died in a car crash.. just an expression "when both our cars collide" think it's means: when we meet again.. can't the words to discrive it exactly.. but good work anyway :D

Thank you for elaborating. I appreciate it.

Or are they pushing their followers into a downward-spiral of self-destruction?

After witnessing the collapse of the World Trade Center from a ferry, Gerard Way, lead singer and founder of My Chemical Romance, felt that he wasn’t making a big enough difference in the world when life can end so abruptly. Too many stops.

It is in the lyrics that many of the fans find their hope and strength to move on and something to relate to. Run-on. Ending in a preposition.

is meant to be inspiring and helpful to fans who have lost a loved one.

Woven into the album is the story of a cancer patient’s final days, going through the stages of grief in the process, from anger to depression and loneliness, and finally ending at acceptance and hope. Incorrect use of a comma. put final days- or the ...

The last paragraph ends abruptly. Try to expand it just a bit. You should never introduce new information in a conclusion paragraph.

Can you please point out any mistakes instead of just stating that they are there? That would be very helpful.

-Agrees wholeheartedly with Dancing Caveman-

Though detest is a bit of a strong word....

Beautifully done, Isis. Wonderful job. :)

I detest MCR, but this is a good essay. You have a few grammatical and spelling errors, though. Be sure to look over it a bit more. Keep in mind that prepositions do not go at the end of sentences, either.