Just a Freak: What Happened to Them - Comments

  • Sarahsaurus-X

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    I just read the whole thing, just now. I feel I have alot in common with Riley (minus the life experiences, just the way we act, except I don't curse as much) Yeah, it was awesome sauce.
    December 24th, 2010 at 10:14pm
  • Fronkensteen

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    I've just read your entire story in, like, two hours. It is *so* good! It's interestingly written, has a captivating point of view and a great plot. It does capture "the raw esensce of teenage being" and it's one of the best reads I've had in a while.
    Thank you.
    September 19th, 2010 at 03:40pm
  • MORExREGRETS

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    Probably one of the best stories written on this site. The ending was just pure genius and you should really consider publishing this or entering it in some sort of competion.
    March 3rd, 2010 at 01:45am
  • My-Foot-Is-Prettier

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    I loved it, I am keeping that story on my subscription list just so I remember and have it there for life.
    November 7th, 2009 at 03:05pm
  • deonna18

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    Oh my gosh your story was awesome
    I like how you,well you dont really understand riley, but you can kinda relate to her on some level.
    Its a really good story and im very happy you created it.=]]
    June 13th, 2009 at 12:31am
  • xXGreyWingsXx

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    AW, I love the future...
    It's so nice. ^_^
    June 1st, 2009 at 09:07pm
  • XxBrokenHEADxX

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    ahh what a great storyy.!
    i lovedd rileys randomeness.
    youu gottah keep writingg.!!
    March 21st, 2009 at 05:53am
  • cocacola LIGHTNING

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    Ive only just read this and i was hooked
    it is absoloutely amazing!
    March 7th, 2009 at 02:58pm
  • tophatsandcorsets

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    OMG, It was good!! I wish it didn't end so fast..:( but still great story!
    January 31st, 2009 at 07:17am
  • Mrs. Mellark

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    i absolutly loved this...all of it...and i liked the fact that you did this journal thingy to close it off
    i liked it so much cuz it sounds like something that could actually happen
    cant wait tor ead more of your stuff =)
    December 22nd, 2008 at 12:40am
  • SammyanthaBelle

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    OMG that was an amazing ending and everything!
    WOOT!
    Cool baninos!
    December 9th, 2008 at 09:31pm
  • i_like_toast

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    Good to know what happened to the characters. :)
    I really enjoyed this story. Please carry on writing such great stories. :D
    November 30th, 2008 at 10:19pm
  • Scarlett Olivia

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    dude
    i so expected this thing
    with caleb
    and the dimples
    and like
    the story ended
    and now i wish i had more than 1 dimple.
    November 30th, 2008 at 04:34am
  • illusions_are_real

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    i loved this story and i'm surprised cause usually i like to read fiction stories and fan-fiction. this is the first story that i read where the plot seemed as if it could actually happen....keep writing and i can't wait to read any more of your stories.
    November 29th, 2008 at 08:41am
  • kdff08

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    I loved this... and this future-outlook is awesome... I loved how you described Rileys future to be... It sounds like something that would be perfect in a books last page... This story was simply great...
    November 28th, 2008 at 01:54am