I just read the whole thing, just now. I feel I have alot in common with Riley (minus the life experiences, just the way we act, except I don't curse as much) Yeah, it was awesome sauce.
I've just read your entire story in, like, two hours. It is *so* good! It's interestingly written, has a captivating point of view and a great plot. It does capture "the raw esensce of teenage being" and it's one of the best reads I've had in a while. Thank you.
Probably one of the best stories written on this site. The ending was just pure genius and you should really consider publishing this or entering it in some sort of competion.
Oh my gosh your story was awesome I like how you,well you dont really understand riley, but you can kinda relate to her on some level. Its a really good story and im very happy you created it.=]]
i absolutly loved this...all of it...and i liked the fact that you did this journal thingy to close it off i liked it so much cuz it sounds like something that could actually happen cant wait tor ead more of your stuff =)
i loved this story and i'm surprised cause usually i like to read fiction stories and fan-fiction. this is the first story that i read where the plot seemed as if it could actually happen....keep writing and i can't wait to read any more of your stories.
I loved this... and this future-outlook is awesome... I loved how you described Rileys future to be... It sounds like something that would be perfect in a books last page... This story was simply great...