I can't decide...can you help me?? - Comments

Ok, so I just read the story as a story and not in chapter formates...if you know what I mean. lol

Anyways, I believe you have it set up perfectly to do other povs. lol I might seem as though I'm pushing this idea but if you would reread the whole thing as a story you might agree. don't know.

Anyways, I would switch to Brian's pov just as you start attacking the zombies, go back a bit. But you'll take it past the time you fall into the black pit lol and they have to get you home and whatnot. I don't know how long you are going to stay out...as that's up to you...lol...but you can play with others povs or just stay with Brian's....though of course I think you should play with others. lol

just my thoughts. :D

I love you too and hope today is going better than yesterday :D

And THAT is why I love you Z!!!

personally I like idea 2. This is a heafty plot and you can work in others opinions and thoughts on the situation and what all they have been through to gain a bit more on where everyone else is coming from. Know what I mean?

Idea 3 could work out alright as well if you just want to move events forwards, though I think you should almost combine the two. move the events forwards through different peoples povs. Know what I mean? You can still give background and opinions and thoughts as well as info on how she's doing and when she's going to wake verse how everyone is taking her being out and what all happens while she is out as well and their reactions to that.... and that is the worlds longest run on sentence right there. lol

I've just read it and I like the past option too :)

Thank you!!

I haven't read your story but the last option sounds good.