I agree, i don't think the title needs to be changed, i think you definitely posess talent for writing songs, or at least from what I've read, for you have only posted one thing, but it was very good and very well written
I like. The words at least. I'd have to hear the music to tell ya 'bout that. Sounds like it'd be a good song though. I like the tittle too. But I'm a simple girl. Keep it simple. Or don't bother tellin me, 'cause I'll be like "WTF dude?" I ramble alot. Sorry bout that... hehe.