Comment for Comment, One Shot. - Comments

It's not that really. I just want some feedback, I want to improve my writing, but without feedback I don't know how, see?
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Wow, you love comments! It's ok, I do too.

If you want to, then would you mind commenting here, on my profile or even at the end of your comment on my story of which one-shot you would like me to read and commenmt?
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