Please don't do this to me, Kim!!!! NO JONAS LOVE TRIANGLES!!!!!
This description is really good, but I don't like Jonas love triangles. Maybe if you changed it, so that the love triangle didn't involve two Jonas', that'd be better.
It's interesting. It seems a little cliche, though. But you've always done a good job of making cliche ideas seem original so I guess it's up to you. But would you actually keep this and update it?