Please help me come up with a title!! - Comments

How about "What Lies Beneath"?

I agree with Viral. The plot is very confusing it lacks more information like what was the deal with the parents why did get so hyped when they found out that their daughter is the most powerful vampire? and how did her parents become vampires? Who turned her? Why did she choose to be a vampire?

but I think it's gonna be a great story, you just need more information in your plots.

lol It makes alot more sense in th book lol I was trying to make the summary quickly without giving away the whole book. I will think about the title :D

... I'm confused as to what the plot is. Not meaning to be offensive, but it seems as if it has a lot of room for flaws and situations that make no sense.

Oh, and another thing. It wouldn't be your own creation if it weren't titled by you, eh? :]