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  • xxdorylovexx

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    Thanks! I'm thinking about redoing the entire story and changing it into first person. But idk if that would make the story work or not.
    January 29th, 2010 at 03:46am
  • Aelf

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    If you ever want a chunk edited or proof-read, you have only to send it to me in a message and I'll post you back some very detailed feedback :)
    January 29th, 2010 at 03:38am
  • jasonsudekis

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    I'll check out At A Glance for you, if you want. I'll just leave some tips in a comment. :)
    January 29th, 2010 at 03:29am
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