Re-writes, Rec, Questions & Moustaches. - Comments

Howl eeek i'm sorry~ /sobs. but yeah, I didn't like how I written my stories, and to be honest - I was going off-track with the story line (cough, in CoH, which is why I'm re-writing it... Cough, I'm fixing it...)
but yeah, i agree with the moustaches. /nods.

1. I've rewritten Their Story about four times...o_O
2. It was corny everytime I read it.
3. Torn Fragility (http://stories.mibba.com/read/274560/Torn-Fragility/)
4. My dad has a moustache...Friendly? Maybe. He can be quite scary.
5. I only like moustaches on middle aged men and older. If a young guy has one it looks fake and undeserved.

Re-write if you want to but warn people! I went on the Colour of Hate the other day and everything vos gone again! (weeps)

Mymockingbird OMG I KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN! COUGHthats why LtN or Touch hasn't been updated for like a monthCOUGH /lame&lazy (.___.)
and yeah! I totes agree with the old men with moustaches - because grandfather = friendly.... where if it was a teenager LOL :|
hahahaha i've always wanted to grow - uh, i mean wear a moustache... X)

1. I SO don't have the patience to go back and fix stories/ rewrite them. I'd seriously rather write 100 new pages than go back and edit 50 pages.
2. I'm Ridiculously Lazy
3.UMMM, well I was working on Memories for a while (http://stories.mibba.com/read/147841/Memories/) but the opening chapters are GAHHH (which, again I'm too lazy to fix)
But right now I'm working on Cracked. which I LOVE TO DEATH, so I'm whoring it out, (http://stories.mibba.com/read/270375/CRACKED/)
4. Men with mustaches are cool in my book. They have to like grandfatherly though. In that case it's like "Cute! Little old man!!" but when it's a teenager who thinks it's cool is gross. It's like "Guys. Teenage girls don't find that sexy. It's like making out with sandpaper."
5. I've been known to wear them occasionally.

Dimli - haha oh thanks. And I agree, I prefer moustaches on old/er people (but never on old ladies) and I actually just noticed. That, yes moustaches do go on villians (sometimes) hahaa. Ohh and I shall read that now :)

You're doing great for first journal! You picked it up quite easily it seems. If you feel up to it, it would be cool if you read The Prying Eye or To Infiltrate.

1. Plenty of times
2. I find flaws (ex mistakes, incoherent at some parts, etc.)
3. I actually am not sure, but The Prying Eye is my first story that made past the barriers of my brain.
4. Depends. Awesome on grandpas that are cool but does not work for others.
5. They're cool for villains but otherwise it can be really gross.

alice fell asleep; ahh thank goodness I wasn't the only one who does this. Thanks for the storiesss

iluvBlooQKazoo awww you can tell me when you do, then :)

[dark eyed dreamer] Yeah, I agree. I was so used to seeing my old man with a moustache, it freaked me out when he lost it. But then again, I prefer guys to have little-to-none facial hair (unless it suits the guy, of course) :)

It seems to me, not many people like moustaches hahaa :)

1. Yes, a few times
2. Because I loved the ideas, but hated the way I presented them the first times around
3. No idea, I go through phases with my stories.
4. It depends on the person, and if you're used to seeing them with one.
5. I prefer cleanly shaven, actually.

Whoring: Any of my stories :]

1) Yes
2) Because it was terrible
3) The one I'm writing now. It's not posted yet, but I'll let you know when I do post it if you like.
4) Not really
5) No

1. Yes, tons of times.
2. Usually, because I don't like the POV its in.
3. Mmmm, Just for a Night probably. Its really good, I believe.
4. haha, no.
5. Not uh.

Oh, and for whoring can you check out my one-shot Conversational Edge.

She floats - True, that. I guess it all depends on the style of the 'stache. Mmmmm five o'clock shadow... /drools. Yeah, as long as it looks good on the guy.

run away screaming - Yes! I'm not the only one that fails at computer stuff! It's aaall good. 'some scream pedophile' haha that made me laugh. X)

silk tea Hahaa thanks, I shall go read them now /salutes

1. Yes.
2. Because I felt like there should be more.
3. Um, I don't know.
4. False. It frightens me.
5. No.

for whoring...Too Much or maybe Different Scars. And original. Building Humans.

UGH.
FAIL.
It didn't link.
Sigh.
My bad.

1. I don't believe I have, actually.
2. SKIP.
3. Just Breathe. If you like it, you could check out the rest of mine, yes? Also, sorry if the link I have on here fails horribly. I am the worst at computer stuff.
4. It depends on the mustache. Some scream 'pedophile!', while others remind me of Santa.
5. Yes.

1. No, though I plan to.
2. It was a great concept but I was young and the execution was awful.
3. Chaptered? Running Water. Oneshots? I don't know. I like almost all of my oneshots.
4. Depends on the 'stache. When I was a little girl, beards and moustaches actually scared me. Sometimes. Except for my dad.
5. Depends. I like a clean face usually, or a five o' clock shadow. Just a little scruff, if there shall be facial hair.

And as for wh*ring, you got it right. I'd like to advertise Running Water or a wordspill I wrote recently: Better.