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I think you should put this in the poetry section, but I definitely see why you put it in Journals. The last line is great. And maybe you didn't mean it this way but it reminded me of the bible. Probably cause I just came from church this morning. Anyways to get to my main point, good job, good ideas, good poem

This is amazing, I have read lots of great works but this has to be one of the best.

that's perfect
i love the last line

youre a beautiful writer i have to say im insanely jealous

This was very good :-D
I loved it!

I like it !

i like that this is such a determined post!
It's not something that's totally pessimistic or narrow-minded, but instead, it's a very motivating one!
It's amazing and it really does change minds. =)

i luv it!!! wow. id right more but im
not using a computer right now. im usig a dsi

i LUBBBBBBBBBBBB this ;D

wow! it's really beautiful :)

Its true on so many levels and it's written beautifully

I agree. I really hope this does happen, in some shape or form.
And last line is such a good conclusion!

Honestly.... Whoa.
I really love this. :D It's so.... Relevent? to what I've been like, lately.
<3

This is great!

Love it.

I do like this.

this is amazing.
I really like it.