If you kill off Vaughn I WILL KILL YOU OFF. I don't care if it'll make the story more meaningful or give it more sentimental value or whatever, YOU CANNOT KILL HIM OFF. You'll be the world's biggest heartbreaker):
But anyways, in response to the tribute. Awh, I think it's wonderful you wrote it alongside your grandma! c: but it's terrible her boyfriend died at such a young age, asdfghjkl :'c
I knew her last name had to do with The Wild Thornberrys! I loved that show. :D You're such a fantastic writer, and you should be infinitely proud of your work; it's amazing.
I love love stories where there is an Illness. Its such a bitch to write, but I feel like those kinds of love stories are so much more meaningful...like they still love each other even though they are going through hell and don't know if things will get any better. I think you do a fantastic job of writing such a true love story that shows all of that :) I can't wait for the next chapter.
ahh! i love those little 'things you didn't know about _______' so much! i think i might know the scientist you're speaking of, but to save myself from looking like a jack*ss i won't say any names. :)
VAUGHN WILL NOT DIE. BECAUSE IF HE DOES. I WILL KILL YOU. And these are not empty threats (they totally are) because seriously. But he will probably die because it would make the story unforgettable and lasting, but I will be a wreck for days, you have no idea.