Author's Notes; I'm A Deer In The Head Lights - Comments

  • shortygirl

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    1. Opinions of Marco? He turned into a dick...they seemed so happy together

    2. Do you see Holly falling for Zack? Yes, no? Yes...she already has

    3. Holly and Zack? Put them together...they would make a cute couple

    4. What do you see happening in the next few chapters? Probably drama...Emily being cute...and just pure madness

    5. What do you want to see happen in the next few chapters? Some more of Jack and Steph....

    6. Do you think the story is getting a bit boring? Should there be a little drama? its not boring but its kinda like at a hault where nothings seems to be happening......drama is a yes, but i think there should be more fun added to it

    i loved the update
    December 6th, 2011 at 01:14am
  • xoxo_aj_xoxo

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    Marco = dick
    zack & holly forever <3
    want to see some more jack and steph.
    I do think there needs to be a little more drama. Maybe more about holly than steph cause I think that steph needs a bit of a break. I think that by making holly full of drama will give zack more of an opportunity to sneak his way in if you know what I mean ;) Update soon.
    Lots of love <3
    December 5th, 2011 at 01:00pm
  • tonic

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    Haven't read it.
    December 5th, 2011 at 12:29pm