Guise. Guise, Listen.(Comment Swap?) - Comments

  • KnifeInTheCrayonBox

    KnifeInTheCrayonBox (200)

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    Ok, I read all of them, and left a comment on two of them, but the one that stood out the most, and was the most polished in my opinion, was Heaven Song. There were a few grammatical errors, but nothing a really good nit-picking couldn't fix. I always love poems that rhyme, that's just something I've always liked, so it may just be me, but that's what I would enter.

    So, for the comment swap could you comment on The Story Of Us or Fighting For Freedom? If it was only a comment swap for poems, well then feel free to check out any of mine, I have a large collection just like you =)
    January 25th, 2012 at 02:29am
  • KnifeInTheCrayonBox

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    I'll go check them out them comment back again. So, I pick a poem, leave a comment, and then you comment on a story of mine?
    January 25th, 2012 at 02:06am