I like the originals. Fan fics aren't always the best. They can be too obsessive, and just think how embarrased the writer would be if the stories were sent into the guys... I'm not a poetry kinda person, but to get the comments, you have to promote it, like in the journals and stuff. Imma read your story, i just finished reading one of the other originals, and i loved it. So i'm going to read yours. =]