Fifty Shades Of Grey: Thoughts up to Chapter 5 - Comments

  • FrankJScott

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    I've only read the first 10 pages of the thing and the whole Grey is handsome, good looking, blah blah blah is so forced and unreal. The author tries to sell it to us that he is this way, but she never makes an effort to actually show it, same as with whatshername. It's like Bella all over again; the author tries to sell it as an "unique" character, different from others, deep, but it is not. The author never makes an effort to give her depth and it is painful to see her becoming this two-dimensional stick figure that's so full of Mary Sueness that it hurts.

    I'm only reading it to make notes and blog about it. I loved Reasoning With Vampires (Tumblr blog that rips Twilight apart, piece by piece) and I'm planning on doing something similar with this one.
    July 13th, 2012 at 03:01pm