December 3rd, 2012 at 06:55am
The only time I outline a story is if I'm posting it (which means, basically never, haha), so I don't know if I'm doing it very well.
But when I do outline, I only do it for one or two chapters at a time (so I won't outline Ch. 3 if I haven't already written Ch. 2). Also, I usually take the vaguest ideas about what's going to happen and throw them onto the page with maybe... two major points per side of the paper.
So it'll just be something like, "Girl gets into a car crash," and, "Parents flip sh*t" on one side.
And then I flesh it out underneath each major point, usually with where, why, when, how, and miscellaneous stuff that I need to add.
I don't know if that makes sense, haha. But it's the best way I can think to describe it.
I don't think outlines are going to help you use more dialogue though. I get so caught up in dialogue, lol maybe I just like listening to the voices chattering in my head but I make up all the conversations my characters have in my head first to make sure they sound real and not forcibly written.
I guess that didn't really answer you question... oh well!