I've read the story, it's awesome. Makes me want to just quit the idea of being a writer, hahaha! I hope she does something with her talent.
I don't have anything that could compare but if you just want something to read, here's one of mine? http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/497376/Colusseum-Armagaddeon/ and I apologize for the copy and paste link, I don't know how to do the cool URL thingies -.-
THIS! Seriously. I'm so flippin jealous of the author, it's not even funny. I don't understand how somebody so young can know so many references to awesome things.