@ Airi. Well thank you (: That means a lot and I know, it's hard to see all the comments on my fan-fictions and then go look at my originals 'cause it's like what am I doing over here that I'm not doing over here. Frustrating :/
Try not to let the lack of feedback get to you, original fiction stories have always been harder to get readers for than fanfiction stories. Fanfiction is just a lot more popular I guess. With some advertising, I'm sure you'll get readers. ^^ I'll take a look at your story a little later when I have more time to sit down and read it. (: