May 18th, 2013 at 06:45pm
Thank you! It helped out quite a bit and was very informative. I appreciate the criticism.
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@ The Sun God
Thank you! It helped out quite a bit and was very informative. I appreciate the criticism. May 18th, 2013 at 06:33pm -
@ dark desires
I commented. I read the prologue and the first chapter.May 18th, 2013 at 06:00pm -
@ dark desires
Yeah cause I would totally do that in retaliation to your very informative and slightly soulcrushing comment. But yeah I'll try to work on it today. It won't be as long as yours but I'll try.May 18th, 2013 at 05:42pm -
@ The Sun God
Well that makes me sound like even more of a pushy bitch.
Thought you might have forgotten.
Seriously, take your time! May 18th, 2013 at 04:50pm -
@ dark desires
Yes you will. Graduation is today and I was called into work yesterday when I was planning to do so.May 18th, 2013 at 04:44pm -
Don't mean to sound pushy (really, I don't), but am I going to get a comment?
May 18th, 2013 at 04:36pm -
@ The Sun God
Commented. I don't have enough time to comment on more than the first chapter, so if you could comment on the first chapter (rather than the prologue), of my story that would be great. It's about equal length with the first chapter of yours.
Hope that's okay and that I'm not too late! May 17th, 2013 at 12:33am -
@ dark desires
A reminder that I do not comment until you do.May 16th, 2013 at 11:00pm -
@ Diamond Bunny.
Thanks girl! May 16th, 2013 at 08:13pm -
Finally a comment swap. Blood and Thunder. I'll be checking out Judgement Day within the next hour or so. May 16th, 2013 at 07:56pm
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Congratulations on graduating soon. :DMay 16th, 2013 at 06:21pm
No problem. Make sure to read. Also a tip of Judgement day, the first chapter is the slowest. I would recommend more than one to really see where it gets going.