"Constructive Criticism Available Here [Unable to Progress with my Stories]" - Comments

@ MissSpitfire: I'm reviewing Fall Out of Love at the moment, unfortunately I don't have time to review the other stories. I'll try and make time tomorrow to read through them, thank you.

Hey I have three if you would be interested in checking them out, all 1D
1. Curiosity- Harry story, only five chapters so far, one of my favourite pieces of work
2. Fall Out of Love- Niall story I have only just started only two chapters
and last 3.Midnight Manor: Vampire One Direction co-writing with another author, sugarplum.
So there you go feel free to comment be as constructive as you want especially on the first two, would love to hear what you think... thanks :D

@ swell: All done! Good luck on your exams, hope you're all set when you do go in to sit for it.

I can't link on my phone but if you could review Where the Wind Takes Us that would be fab

I'd go for a comment swap but I have an exam tomorrow which I hae yet to study for

@ whimsical waves: All done!

I would love a comment on the summary of this or the last chapter of this.