Description or Dialogue? - Comments

  • kyojin;

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    @ BILINSKI
    Yeah, I try to do that shit as little as possible. Like, one of my chaptered stories I actually spent a whole paragraph describing one of the boys and it was like seriously painful to write but because it was in his love interest's perspective and he's like staring at bro, I felt like it was necessary to add but otherwise, I NEVER describe shit like that. Like, I might mention something in passing ("he drummed his long, knobby fingers on the desk" <- SEE THERE'S A ACTION!!!) but I never go out of my way to explain things (His fingers were long and knobby and his wrists were boney and blah blah blah blahhh" <- not DOING jack shit, just being. Snob ) I just find it to be a waste of time and usually distracts from the point at hand. That is, except int those rare scenarios like I mentioned where bro is staring at something and practically analyzing it under a microscope. Whistle
    June 19th, 2013 at 07:07am
  • Louise Belcher

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    I do consider narration of action to be different from "description," though. So maybe that makes my judgement a little different than other peoples... Shifty
    SAAAME. It's the stuff like "the trees were like a hot summers day - dead" kind of stuff that makes me go Crazy. But describing what they're doing is my cup of joe. Coffee
    June 19th, 2013 at 05:08am
  • kyojin;

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    I DEMAND AN UPDATE ON MODERATELY HOMO! NOW!! Twitch

    Personally, I like prose. A lot of reflection and stuff, and a good bit of dialogue and action, then some physical description sprinkled in sparingly. That's just my style though, and generally what I enjoy reading. Coffee

    edit: I do consider narration of action to be different from "description," though. So maybe that makes my judgement a little different than other peoples... Shifty
    June 19th, 2013 at 04:56am
  • Lady.V.

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    A well-written story has good balance between description and dialogue.
    June 19th, 2013 at 04:49am
  • Don'tFearTheReaper

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    you honestly have to balance both. sometimes, all you need is dialogue; maybe to keep the mood light. but other times, maybe emotional or thoughtful moments, you might need description to get what you're really trying to say. it honestly depends on what you're describing.... i don't know if this helped, sorry
    June 19th, 2013 at 04:33am
  • Chairman Meow

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    I prefer when both dialogue and descriptions are balanced. But I'm leaning towards dialogue. Sometimes, too much descriptions just confuses me. Especially if they use big words and complicated metaphors that I just can't understand.
    June 19th, 2013 at 04:31am
  • RaeStardust.

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    I prefer dialogue. I'm not good with descriptions, I suck at describing things, really. So dialogue is so much easier to write for me. And then there comes the comments saying I need to add more description, blah.
    June 19th, 2013 at 04:05am
  • aubs

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    For some reason, I've always liked reading, and writing, description more than dialogue. With description, I don't really have to think about how the character would say or not say; I just have to focus on the surrounding areas. I don't know, description, to me, is more fun to both read and write.
    June 19th, 2013 at 03:54am