June 19th, 2013 at 07:07am
SAAAME. It's the stuff like "the trees were like a hot summers day - dead" kind of stuff that makes me go . But describing what they're doing is my cup of joe.
- addesin:
- I do consider narration of action to be different from "description," though. So maybe that makes my judgement a little different than other peoples...
Yeah, I try to do that shit as little as possible. Like, one of my chaptered stories I actually spent a whole paragraph describing one of the boys and it was like seriously painful to write but because it was in his love interest's perspective and he's like staring at bro, I felt like it was necessary to add but otherwise, I NEVER describe shit like that. Like, I might mention something in passing ("he drummed his long, knobby fingers on the desk" <- SEE THERE'S A ACTION!!!) but I never go out of my way to explain things (His fingers were long and knobby and his wrists were boney and blah blah blah blahhh" <- not DOING jack shit, just being. ) I just find it to be a waste of time and usually distracts from the point at hand. That is, except int those rare scenarios like I mentioned where bro is staring at something and practically analyzing it under a microscope.