June 10th, 2014 at 03:53pm
I don't think you put too much dialogue in it - that could just be how you write. Personally, I write with a lot of sentence fragments in my stories and I know some people don't like that. It's just a personal preference :)
Maybe leave the story a while like you said and then see if another genre fits it. I have a few stories with only 2 genres.
OK that could work thank you.