Slash Help? - Comments

Don't base sex scenes on porn you've seen lol. You can add a comedic approach or a romantic approach but the realistic ones are the best. If it's your character's first time, it's probably not going to be perfect, it might be awkward and a little embarrassing, ya know? Let your character's personalities shine through and let them interact and respond to each other.

I suggest writing down some basic. scenes, ones that might seem like a drabble and start from there.

Though I've never participated in a sexual act myself, the "5 Senses Rule" is a good thing to live by for any piece of writing when thinking about description and describing a certain scene, person, or action.

Remember them:

Sight
Touch
Sound
Taste
Smell

Examples:

Describe how the person feels both mentally and physically--Do they like it? Does it feel nice, or does it hurt?
Describe their breath--is it shallow and quiet, or loud and heaving?
What do they look like without any clothes on (or with, if they're into that)--What kinds of marks mar their body? DO they have freckles, moles, scars?
Do they sweat? If so, what does it smell like? Or is their scent masked by cologne? How strong, how weak?
How do their lips (or any other unmentionable appendages) taste? What about the texture, is it soft or hard?

@ i am potato
Thank you! I plan on reading a lot on here. Thank you.

@ JamieAllOver.
Thank you! I appreciate it a lot! :)

@ i am potato
Thank you! I plan on reading a lot on here. Thank you.

@ JamieAllOver.
Thank you! I appreciate it a lot! :)

i write a ton of slash smut, so if you need someone to read over what you have before it gets posted or something, i'd be able to do that.

Hey! My name's Lina.

I used to write quite a number of slash smut a few years ago although for some reasons I stopped and deleted them all. It was awkward at first so I did a lot of reading to get the feel (that sounds awkward ) Anyway, my advice is to just read a lot, do quite a bit of research and just write. You'll improve over time.