Beta Reader? Anyone? - Comments

I'm Dutch and I had no idea even coloured was considered mildly racist. God how words get screwed up by racism eh. We would love all the help. do you have Facebook? I can add you to the Google doc so you can edit.

I can help out if you still need it - also when advertising this story "coloured" is correct as far as the story and synopsis and such go, but when speaking about it like this it's seen as offensive and should be replaced with "woman of colour" (:

Also I can't wait to read this!

I'd glady help to check for spelling/grammar errors! I'll try my best to give any other advice too, if you want.