@ Thothammun Thanks for reading the poem. I'm glad you liked it! I actually was really pleased with how it turned out, which is rare for me. I'll definitely keep writing, and if you want to read more of my poetry there's lots more there on my WordPress site!
Read your poem and I think it is kick ass!!! You write in the same vein as my daughter. Really great. My works are very dark and apocalyptic. Just wanted to tell you to keep writing and I will check out more of your works.
Thanks for reading the poem. I'm glad you liked it! I actually was really pleased with how it turned out, which is rare for me. I'll definitely keep writing, and if you want to read more of my poetry there's lots more there on my WordPress site!