A Masterlist of Things We Want to See in Fiction - Comments

  • Albluerose

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    Where is this pirate contest of yours???
    June 11th, 2016 at 11:33pm
  • Albluerose

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    I would love to see more pirate stories, I love pirate stories. Omg I would love to see an assassins Creed story as well.
    June 11th, 2016 at 11:32pm
  • Lily Barnes

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    @ starfire.
    I think we all secretly thought the space pirates in Treasure Planet were freaking cool
    June 1st, 2016 at 12:59pm
  • squidward tentacles.

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    @ Lily Barnes
    Even better! I specifically made a pirate contest on here because I'm obsessed and threw out the suggestion of space pirates. lmfao
    June 1st, 2016 at 12:56pm
  • Lily Barnes

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    This list is amazing. I agree completely that every story needs these things, particularly secondary characters that are real players instead of a device to move the plot along. I think we've all seen enough of the bitchy ex girlfriend who appears suddenly to wreck the relationship and then vanishes without a trace later in the story.

    @ starfire.
    What if they were combined? Mr. Green
    June 1st, 2016 at 12:55pm
  • PoeticMess.

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    I'm actually proud of myself for naturally having quite a few of these things in my stories. My female characters are always confident in themselves and independent but still want to look nice (clothes/makeup) without going over the top. I have characters who have been wrong about a lot and who are learning to make the right decisions. I have intricate secondary character plot lines. I have a space story. A college story. And a few other things on this list.

    But there is a lot I should work on. Cultural Diversity is a big one for me. And adding a bit more diversity in my male characters when it comes to their personalities.

    This list is great.
    June 1st, 2016 at 08:34am
  • swell

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    fucks sake jordan now I want to write an OG YA fic with everything on this list lmfao
    fab list tho A+ would recc a million times if I could
    June 1st, 2016 at 08:30am
  • n. josten

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    I love everything about this list Hail
    June 1st, 2016 at 08:05am
  • warmaiden

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    I PREACH PLATONIC MALE/FEMALE RELATIONSHIPS
    June 1st, 2016 at 07:31am
  • hangsang.

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    THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS BLOG! Everything you listed are things that I'm looking for. Bless this and bless you.Hail
    June 1st, 2016 at 07:23am
  • dawn of light

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    yo, this list Hail
    June 1st, 2016 at 06:48am
  • Alsoldey

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    and definitely more colored original characters.
    June 1st, 2016 at 06:45am
  • oh bear

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    Girl your blogs are killing it. I love everything on your lists. Especially ↳ Boys who don't play sports but live it through the television because that made me laugh XD And also because that's literally me_irl lmfao
    June 1st, 2016 at 06:42am
  • squidward tentacles.

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    I soooo agree with the space sci-fi and pirates. lmfao
    June 1st, 2016 at 06:32am