More lame poetry - Comments

  • maddiemuerte!

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    Oh my Bob.
    This is great :D
    December 6th, 2007 at 10:46am
  • Moshing Monster

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    i like how you end so perfectly with "Dance so slow"... it's like your slowing down the way you say your poem... I love it!
    liz
    January 19th, 2007 at 02:33am
  • Alexithymia

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    i like this one :D
    January 19th, 2007 at 02:29am