Editors, Please Help... Crying - Comments

You can always PM me if you ever need editing help

I'm gonna be on mobile all day which makes editing from a blog a horrible pain

After all, sticks and stones break bones but words can never hurt us.

This might sound better as 'Sticks and stones may break bones'. It just seems to flow better to me.

or

'Sticks and stones may break our bones'

That was the only thing I found... this is a strong piece of writing :) Obviously, other people may find other things (sometimes I get too engrossed in the writing LOL!)

I want to give you a hug for experiencing something like this you and your health conditions are in my thoughts

As for editing, I suck at it so I'm sorry I can't help with that