New story idea — Opinions on layout and summary would be much appreciated :) [That's your cue Mibba]

K so, I haven't written anything on my own in a while now. Maybe because I simply haven't had the time. I've been stealthily creeping Mibba, y'know updating my profile and username several times, yet now it's time to do what I am on here for, and that is to post another story (which I hope I'll actually finish this time -_-')

This is where ya'll come in. I have my summary written up and the entire layout done, yet I do need your opinions and criticsism. Don't hesitate in leaving a nice little comment on what you think I should improve on the comment page. I know the layout is pretty dull, but I like the title. Im proud of it. :3

Beyond the Depths of Insanity

I know the summary is quite long, bleh. But I have this problem with over detailing. It's not a bad thing, yet I have a tendency to bore people with it, I think.

On a side note, I've decided to actually save the money I earn this summer, half of my paycheck is actually jacked from me for college savings, and I need to buy some new clothes and stuff for myself before school starts. To please myself and no one else :)