-_- I need to sleep.... second straight comment for me to do today since only one person commented on your journal post...... again :D! It is actually really good, but I agree, unless there was this new word created for the story, the words Debths should be corrected because you write the title here with the correct word. Other than that, everything is good. Also, it was a good summary. It had me reading as if it was the story in my mind, thinking what is going on, what, why's she scared, where, oh my god what is going on, take her where, no, why, why stop there, I wanna know what happens, dammmmnnn youuuuu!! Had me wanting to read more, haha.
For the title I think Debths should be Depths unless the word you have now means something different. I think the layout looks nice and the summary is great. =)
It is actually really good, but I agree, unless there was this new word created for the story, the words Debths should be corrected because you write the title here with the correct word. Other than that, everything is good.
Also, it was a good summary. It had me reading as if it was the story in my mind, thinking what is going on, what, why's she scared, where, oh my god what is going on, take her where, no, why, why stop there, I wanna know what happens, dammmmnnn youuuuu!!
Had me wanting to read more, haha.