Read and Comment on These?

Maybe I Deserve It
Maybe I Deserve It is a poem I wrote. It's about recovery.

My Story
My Story is my life story summed up. It's a true story (obviously). It's about how I found God so if you plan on bashing me for my beliefs don't read it.

Also, they aren't long and won't take you long to read, but could you guys please read these and comment on them? It would mean a lot to me.