Please Help..?

Hey There.
I Was Wondering If Anyone Could Edit My Story. Becasue Im Not Sure What Is Wrong Wth It. And I Has Being Suspended. I Would Be REALLY Greatful If You Could. Thanks.

Well Today Sucked. I Had Another Horrible Day WIth My Hrrible Teacher. She Made One of The Boys In My Class Cry Today. It Was SOO Unfair.
I Have A Ton Of Home Work And I Have To Figure Out Whats Wrong With My Story!!!

Hmm.

So Please Can Some On Edit My Story..? I Would Be Ever So Greatful! Thanks.

So How Are You All?!

xoxox