All About Sex

I've written one sex scene. I try not to go back and read it because I'll be tempted to delete it.
I don't really like reading my own writing once I've posted it, unless It needs editing or something.
I like sex scenes that aren't too graphic, but just enough for you to picture what's happening.
Really good ones make me jizz :shifty

daisuke andou.:

Tom Felton.:

Hey guys. :shifty This is my first time here, I feel all n00b-like. :XD But I have a question.

Does anyone have tips for writing rough sex? Not like bondage or BDSM, more like just general biting, bruising, being dominant, that sort of thing. Thanks in advance. :cute:

I could use tips on this as well, since I'm meant to be writing two horny chaptered fics, one involving an incredibly aggressive vampire. :shifty

And I can't write smut without getting all giggly :XD

Same here...its super hard for me... I have written some sex scenes they just go to quickly or they don't turn out like I expected...

I'm planning on writing some sex stuff for my Jacob Black story... but I'm not sure how that'd go...
Any tips/ideas?

...:tehe: this is page 69.
Thought I'd throw that out there.

I was originally going to write one, but it was just so awkward to write. I find that I'm fine until it actually involves some kind of sex, and then I generally just skip it out.

I can't write blatant sex. I'll describe it emotionally, talk about it subtly, mention what happened after... but I can never just write and then he stuck his throbbing meaty sausage breadstick into...no. That's gross. And boring. It's practically pornography and doesn't seem to have any meaning.

fool's paradise:

I can't write blatant sex. I'll describe it emotionally, talk about it subtly, mention what happened after... but I can never just write and then he stuck his throbbing meaty sausage breadstick into...no. That's gross. And boring. It's practically pornography and doesn't seem to have any meaning.

Well, if you are writing about a throbbing piece of meat it would seem disgusting.

I love blatant sex. And I love blatant sex as a plot device that really does have a meaning but you have to go through the reading of the sex to understand it.

I love sex as a plot device. I rarely write stories without sex nowadays, rarely ever read them.

Sex is important and I think we demean how important it can be and how well it can be used in literature when we liken a story containing sex to pornography.

fool's paradise:

I can't write blatant sex. I'll describe it emotionally, talk about it subtly, mention what happened after... but I can never just write and then he stuck his throbbing meaty sausage breadstick into...no. That's gross. And boring. It's practically pornography and doesn't seem to have any meaning.

:omfg:
I'm eating sausage!
Thanks for ruining it now. :lmfao

I love writing about first times.
I'm uber proud of that part of Chances.

I love making it detailed without making it pornographic, too.

Hello.
I have a question and I thought you people would be the go to girls/guys.
I need alternative words to penis and vagina.
The obvious ones I've already considered cock, pussy, cunt but sometimes those words are a little harsh for the romantic scenes or scenes that don't involve sex.

So yeah, any alternatives that are little totally pansy words but aren't to harsh?

^ A friend of mine described vagina as 'velvety lips' in a story once. I thought it sounded fine.

As for penis, maybe just member or erection? I don't know.. mostly all of them make me laugh. :XD

^
I've tried to use erection but its such a techincal term. I feel like I'm using phallus or something when I say erection. I think I'm better off sticking to 'member' and 'velvety lips/slit'
XD
Though velevty lips makes me kinda giggle.

^ lol I actually thought it sounded quite nice - a better description than most I've heard, anyway.

Well, in the context it was written it didn't sound weird at all.

Vivacious.:

^
I've tried to use erection but its such a techincal term. I feel like I'm using phallus or something when I say erection. I think I'm better off sticking to 'member' and 'velvety lips/slit'
XD
Though velevty lips makes me kinda giggle.

Is it really necessary to describe the whole anatomy and the process of what's going on?

Couldn't it just be something like:
He slid into her or something like that?

It's because it still sounds pretty much like a sexuality lesson if you explain everything that's happening.

I've got a question.

I've written a sex scene before and it was pretty bad. I try not to re-read it. But I'm writing a story with a friend of mine and the girl character that's going to be doing the dirty is having sex for the first time. And I've never written about a first time before.

Does anyone have any tips for me? You can send them in a message if you do. I may also have a few more questions for you later too. :]

^ If she's having it for the first time, you could describe the scene as awkward and weird, because in real life it would be; it really depends if the sex is going to be the main theme of your story, if not then it would probably be better not to go too graphic.

Message me if you have any other questions.

How do you describe a girl's orgasm...? I'm a guy...and only sixteen...and...god. I heard it's supposed to feel a lot better than a guy's orgasm. But I don't know. What exactually happens (other than spraying, tightening up, etc.)? Any sensations someone would care to describe? Thanks.

Potatoes:

How do you describe a girl's orgasm...? I'm a guy...and only sixteen...and...god. I heard it's supposed to feel a lot better than a guy's orgasm. But I don't know. What exactually happens (other than spraying, tightening up, etc.)? Any sensations someone would care to describe? Thanks.

Spraying? Lol not every girl does that, haha. In fact I'm pretty sure it's not all that common. ;)

Having an orgasm is like.. well you feel a tightening in the stomach before it happens and then it just kinda hits you like a major rush or an explosion.

Sorry it's kinda hard to explain, for me anyway. Hope someone else can offer more.

Potatoes:

How do you describe a girl's orgasm...? I'm a guy...and only sixteen...and...god. I heard it's supposed to feel a lot better than a guy's orgasm. But I don't know. What exactually happens (other than spraying, tightening up, etc.)? Any sensations someone would care to describe? Thanks.

I guess, to describe it...
I would say it's kind of like that swoosh when you go down the roller coaster and it feels like the entire bottom of your stomach has dropped out.
Most girls do not ejaculate and even the ones that do don't do it every time they come.

Haha, yeah...well, my character can spray. DX

Thanks so muchy for the help. I think I have an idea of it all now... :]

Haha, yeah...well, my character can spray. DX

Thanks so much for the help. I think I have an idea of it all now... :]