Erm... I suppose I'll rate
@ LadyBatCat 's "Vampire's Kiss"?
Definitely a 9 for me. I love the simplicity of your background, the smoke has a specific feel to it that I think goes well with your type of story. The way your title photo is designed is really clever and eye-catching; the color scheme is also very pulled together. Simple, but clearly effective.
The lines are clean, which I'm also a fan of, and the pattern border along one side is actually quite complementary. Overall, I love the layout - if anything, my critique would be that your text is pushing riiight up against the borders, so you may consider giving a small margin for breathing room. Other than that, I love it. :)
Between the Breaths.