Galaxies

@ little sparrow.
I trust you I'll save my questions for after that gets posted!

@ little sparrow.
I just realized I'm not an author

@ Katie Mosing
Thank you for reminding me! Give me thirty seconds

@ little sparrow.
I's totally fine

@ Hannah Murray.
@ Katie Mosing
@ HeyJudeDontLetMeDown
@ EdWiN.isamonster

Prologue is up! Sorry it's so short. And I figured they they should be stuck on Earth because it will take Louis, like, four months to recreate/fix the portal to get back home. If anyone still has any questions, feel free to ask c:

@ little sparrow.
I loved it!! I'm even more excited for this now than I was before! :D

@ little sparrow.
That is fantastic! :D are the places they're meant to go to supposed to be mixed up?

@ little sparrow.
It was perfect and I loved it such a brilliant start!
I think the only question I still have is, how much exactly do they know about human culture? Like do they know what a kiss is? Or love?

@ little sparrow.
I love the summary, it's seriously wonderful! I'm so pumped to start working on this story!

@ HeyJudeDontLetMeDown
@ EdWiN.isamonster
@ Katie Mosing
@ Hannah Murray.

Thank you so much guys! But I'm thinking maybe we should switch to third person after all so that Liam and Louis can be talking about how they're stuck until Louis stabalizes the portal or something. We could make it work with first person by having the girls overhear them sometimes or something, it's up to you guys, I think I've controlled enough.
As for your question Katie I think the different guys should all know different things. Like harry woul know all the biological things, like diseases and how babies are made
Liam would probably know all about their armies and war and weapons, Louis would know their technology, Zayn would probably know most everything, and Niall would know either a bunch of random things or nothing at all.
Does that help?

@ little sparrow.
Yes, it does!! I am way too excited now. This is going to be perfect

I'm actually better with third person, so I'd be fine either way. It would definitely make the beginning easier!

Are you still going to go next to show us what you were thinking for the first round?!

@ Katie Mosing
Yes I will, I was just at the Hobbit last night and didn't get home until late, so I kind of just posted the prologue and crashed. That and I wanted to double check if we want 3rd or 1st person before I started

@ little sparrow.
Oh, that's totally okay Take your time! I've heard it was amazing

Oh my gosh, I have one last question don't hate me. How 'socially awkward' are the boys supposed to be? I think you said something about them not understand cussing, but do they understand other social cues? And do they like know what are okay things to say and what aren't? Like we know not to talk about sex in public, but do they?

@ Katie Mosing
Nope! Zayn might understand some of that, but the rest are going to be awkward as Hell. They'll probably just say things like "Why wouldn't a man want to procreate with you? You have a very fitting body for bearing children" In the middle of the mall or something, very funny things

@ Katie Mosing
And yes, the Hobbit is fantastic. I've already seen it twice and geeked out both times

@ little sparrow.
Okay, perfect That's totally what I had in mind.

I want to see it soooo bad! But I hate imax 3D It hurts my eyes. I heard people were getting sick in it or something weird? I have no idea!

I'm still confused by where they're supposed to each be sent :/

@ EdWiN.isamonster
They're going to be sent to the places that we said, but it wasn't what Louis had originally planned. He was going to send them each to the places Ashlee said in the chapter, but things malfunctioned and they were sent to other places. Does that make sense?

@ Katie Mosing
Yes! Haha okay thanks for that, I feels like a yard now

@ EdWiN.isamonster
It's totally okay I thought the same thing when I first read where the boys were placed, and then when she said they would be sent all over the place, I was like ooohhh...