hey everybody!!! so, i'm really excited to be writing with you all! i haven't really posted a full story in quite a while, and this is my first ever co-write with people other than my best friend. so i'm massively pumped, needless to say!!
this is just a random idea for a title, either group or story, but maybe "The Vigilantes" could work? It doesn't seem mysterious enough, but it keeps coming back to me, so I figured I'd throw it out there. :)
12 chapters each sounds great to me!!! :D Do you think that "The A Team" will find out that the file is actually about the leader of their team being corrupt around chapter 40? I think that it gives the groups enough time to really go head to head with intense action scenes as well as give character development. Then we'd have the last 20 chapters to have the government fighting back and the teams getting around it.
Also, here's my relationship bio:
Harry had been working for MI6 for a few years and honestly hated his job. He knew that working for his country was the best way to let his anger out without getting into trouble with his ferocious ways, but the longer he stayed the angrier he became with his parliament. The thought of throttling his boss had come into mind a few times, but on one mission in particular, he knew it was time to quit.
Chantal also was disgusted by the way the DGSE was run. Rather than attempting to find missions to help protect France's residents, they were more concerned with having a higher prestige than the other French intelligence agencies.
When Chantal is held at gunpoint by Harry during a mission to protect/obtain a valuable prisoner, the two fell into a flirtatious banter discussing how Harry honestly didn't want to kill a beautiful creature like Chantal, but it was his bosses orders. Chantal figures that she'll probably be dying within a few moments, so she has no fear sharing her mutual hatred for her own government, and the two decide to go rouge, letting the prisoner go free with an alias that Chantal's team already made up for him and a name for someone who could change the fake name to another so the DGSE can't find him again.
Harry and Chantal practiced combat together, working on developing the skills that the other was dominate in, and learned different techniques from each other. Their relationship is platonic, protecting the other with their own life, but other than a few sarcastically flirtatious remarks, they don't show any signs of fancying each other.
I also have an idea if you want to sacrifice my character as a potential for being killed (or incredibly maimed at one point), I'm cool with that! I just have an idea that Harry would be waiting by her bed and when he sees her wake up he yells angrily at her that she can never do that to him again. When he looks at her, she has a small, sad frown on her lips and her eyes look defeated and broken. He kisses her then, and they go back to normal, but once the mission is over they'd maybe do one more big heist to reel in some money and then retire at a young age together and admittedly in love.
