Assassins!

hey, can we put all the plot info above into on thing just so that it's easier to keep track of? also, i'm so excited for this story :)

@ Carpe Diem !
Okie! :)

And.. Oh yeah.. *tear* I know how that feels.. My aunt died a while back, and my mom didn't tell me untol the 1 year annoversary.. Because she lived in India..

And no problemo!;

@ grl_lk_moi_320
Yes ma'am, I'm working on putting it in the info section as we speak.

@ GoodGirl;
Awe, I'm sorry ):

@ Carpe Diem !
Oh well.. She's in a better place than out effed up society

@ GoodGirl;
This is very true.

@ Carpe Diem !

I loved the prologue! They are such punks! I can't wait for the next chapter:)

@ the_space_between
hahaha I wasn't expecting you to call them punks.

@ Carpe Diem !

Well they're sticking it to the man and stuff. So punk. whaha! I call everyone a punk. It's like my go-to word. Some people say "sup bitch?" or "yo bro!" I say "hello punk."

@ the_space_between
I'm one of those "sup bitch?" and "hey fucker" people haha.

@ grl_lk_moi_320
@ GoodGirl;
@ lovelyacoustic
@ the_space_between

I updated todayy! Lemme know what you guys think!

@ Carpe Diem !

Loved it! Haha I appreciated the allusions to Cornelia:) this is already pretty intesne. I can't wait to see the next one!

@ the_space_between
I'm glad you liked the allusions! I tried to do some but not too much because I want to leave that to you!

Hey so I'm currently in Dublin so I won't be able to update until Monday. I haven't read it yet but I wanted to check this in case of the scenario where I had to post and didn't let you know that I couldn't. Sort of like right now. I can't wait to read it though, and based upon the reactions, I'm sure it's brilliant!!!!

@ lovelyacoustic
the fact that you're in Dublin is awesome, by the way. And that's fine, Sree is before you so you should have plenty of time.

@ Carpe Diem !
@ lovelyacoustic

That's totally cool!! I'll have my update done, but I need to update Long live The King! first.. So, it might take a few days

@ GoodGirl;
That's fine, don't worry. I have like seven of my own stories that I'm writing updates for as we speak. As long as we have at least one update once a week, I figure we'll be fine.

@GoodGirl;
As I was reading, I came up with an idea. I'm assuming that Zayn and Fallon will start to develop feelings of attraction at the very least before chapter 40. If that's the case, would you maybe want to have Zayn introduce the idea to Fallon that the file might hurt her especially because it has to do with her father. He could say something like "Did you ever maybe think that your father isn't the man he claims to be?" or something that alludes to the file. That way she can discuss her feelings about liking Zayn back, trying to understand what he means, and let Zayn show that he is frustrated that he has to work against a girl who would probably be on his side if she knew the real story.

You don't have to go through with that whole thing, but I figured that since Zayn and Fallon are the only couple that are from separate sides, their relationship would be a good one to work with for getting the two teams together. Also, it places the doubt to settle in before the big collab. I can post in chaper 39 how Zayn talked to her and where things might be headed, and then chapter 40 they'll merge. :D That's if we all like this idea, and you in particular Sree.

I'm gonna add everybody to this to see if it's a yay or a nay motion. @the_space_between @Carpe Diem ! @grl_lk_moi_320

@ lovelyacoustic
It's whatever Sree wants to do! I like that idea, but it's her character, so she can choose! I just got back to my dorm life now so I can avidly work with this now that I'm on not spring break lmao.