One Direction Group-Write!

  • luminos.

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    @ broken bells
    We could just delete her chapter and make it so she was never a character. That way we wouldn't have regular chapters and then just one random one for Grace.
    November 24th, 2013 at 10:37pm
  • broken bells

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    @ luminos.
    That might be better. She's mentioned in the other chapters but she could just be a random, really.

    @ Halliwell
    What do you think about that?
    November 24th, 2013 at 10:44pm
  • luminos.

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    @ broken bells
    I think it would make it flow better and everything and she's only had one chapter so people might not even notice. But we could just write it in our author's note explaining what happened!
    November 24th, 2013 at 11:06pm
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    @ broken bells
    I think it would make it flow better and everything and she's only had one chapter so people might not even notice. But we could just write it in our author's note explaining what happened!
    November 24th, 2013 at 11:06pm
  • Halliwell

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    @ luminos.
    @ broken bells

    I like the idea. Any mention of Grace could be edited out of our chapters because nothing's really happened to mention her except for the meeting in one chapter, right?

    So my chapter will be done and posted tomorrow.
    November 25th, 2013 at 12:29am
  • luminos.

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    @ Halliwell
    Yeah, I think so!
    November 25th, 2013 at 12:33am
  • dancingskiingwriter

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    November 25th, 2013 at 12:34pm
  • luminos.

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    @ dancingskiingwriter
    You've taken 3 months to write one chapter... You could have written a sentence a day and pretty much been done with it in that amount of time. If you're busy with school now, it's unlikely you won't still be busy next month, next semester, when you actually start college, etc. it just doesn't seem like you have the time to write this story and it's not fair to have the whole thing held back because of one person. You said consistently that you would update but never did. It's just not fair to the rest of us and I think the other girls agree.
    November 25th, 2013 at 02:15pm
  • dancingskiingwriter

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    November 25th, 2013 at 02:43pm
  • luminos.

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    @ dancingskiingwriter
    You're not a disappointment, you just didn't know you were gonna be busy when we started this. It's not your fault.
    November 25th, 2013 at 02:45pm
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    November 25th, 2013 at 03:40pm
  • Mogar.

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    @ dancingskiingwriter
    -hugs-
    November 25th, 2013 at 04:10pm
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    November 25th, 2013 at 04:12pm
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    @ dancingskiingwriter
    Eh, don't be sorry :) I completely understand. I am in school now, plus, I joined my schools knowledge bowl, so on top of just school work to do, I have to learn and master an entire topic. I'm always busy. When I'm not in school, I see my best friends, so I'm hardly home. Plus, with the stress some stupid bitch at school is giving me, I am surprised I can even get chapters of my story Cleo out. >>

    Don't be sorry, just live yo life like theirs no damn rules. OMG I AM QUOTING K-POP! o.0 Allie, what have you done to me?! Okay, it's more...Kanye than K-Pop, but I could just go on more with Ayyy Girl! Now it's K-Pop (Sorry, tired and a little hyper. ><)
    November 25th, 2013 at 04:23pm
  • dancingskiingwriter

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    November 25th, 2013 at 04:51pm
  • broken bells

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    @ dancingskiingwriter
    I'm feeling so horrible about this, oh my.

    You're not a disappointment. Things happen that we didn't plan and we started this story back in the summer, when almost everyone actually has the time. It wasn't like you joined this group write planning on being busy -- important stuff just came up. School is more important and it just happens to be making you extremely busy. None of that's your fault.

    I just want to make sure you know that I didn't want you out of this story and I don't at all blame you but it's been three months and I was just ready to drop it.
    November 25th, 2013 at 05:05pm
  • dancingskiingwriter

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    November 25th, 2013 at 05:12pm
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    @ dancingskiingwriter
    I didn't want you to be either but I didn't want you to continue to feel pressured or be bothered about it when you've got more important and time-consuming things going on that needs your attention more than a story.
    November 25th, 2013 at 05:14pm
  • dancingskiingwriter

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    November 25th, 2013 at 06:02pm
  • luminos.

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    @ dancingskiingwriter
    Yeah, I get that, I just don't want to have to keep waiting forever for updates. We're going to lose all our readers and get uninterested in the story if we have to keep waiting forever. 3 months is way too long.
    November 25th, 2013 at 06:40pm