The Most Awesome One Direction Group Write Ever

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    Okay, so this is just so I know I'm understanding everything correctly. =)

    The girls and the boys are going to be in a remote place at a fancy house to get to know each other better and bond before they go on tour together.

    At first things seem to be going quite well, but then two members begin to fight and it kinda starts a chain reaction, making the two groups tense.

    Some of the events happening besides the causal banters between the bands is a food fight. (I think we need a couple more things for the house too, for events that is)

    Okay, so when they go on tour or start the tour do we want them to be getting along or do we still want them to be bickering and what not?

    And once they get on tour another band comes up, which one of the members of this other band has dated one of our girls and it's causing problems for everyone.

    This is what is going on right, cause I don't want to start the first chapter without having everything straight, lol.
    =)
    August 19th, 2013 at 06:31pm
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    Yeah, that is what I got from everything!
    August 19th, 2013 at 07:58pm
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    Yup, that's what I'm getting too!
    August 20th, 2013 at 03:34am
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    yep thats what it is and they will still be in a banter after the house a bit
    August 26th, 2013 at 08:22pm
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    Ladies I have put up the first chapter. I wasn't sure how to go about it exactly, but hopefully you all will enjoy it.
    Also I apologize for the wait and I am also sorry if there are grammar or spelling errors in my chapter, if you see them feel free to fix them and or tell me about this.
    =)
    September 11th, 2013 at 03:55am
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    Oh gosh, that was wonderful! :D I freaked out when I saw your reply. XD
    THIS IS HAPPENING!

    But whaat, you gave Kitty heterochromia, that's dope. I didn't expect that!
    I enjoyed your chapter hun! I didn't see any mistakes, though I'm not really good at pointing those out, only two words. You said 'liked' instead of 'looked' and 'they' instead of 'the.'
    I fixed them, so no worries!
    September 11th, 2013 at 08:20am
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    HAHA, thanks girl!
    =D

    Yeah that heterochromia thing was like a last minute idea.
    I figured it would be a good conversation starter for her. I had a boos with it before and people always talked about it so yeah lol
    September 11th, 2013 at 04:40pm
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    Ir was amazing. Next is the lovely Corie im getting goose bumps
    September 12th, 2013 at 01:20am
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    Why thank you, I wrote it in one sitting lol, so I thought it was probably crap.
    But I'm glad to hear you liked it =)
    September 12th, 2013 at 05:57am
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    OK, I just got a huge rush of excitement for this story! Especially after rereading your chapter, Crystel!

    Should we start a chapter outline, and follow along with it, with changes here and there as we go on with them? Just so we all don't start off with arriving, and maybe one of the characters could be a day late, cursing up a storm? I don't know. We could all agree on what could happen in the next chapters. And how to start it off, and what things they'll do while at the manor? And what the arguments will be about.
    September 23rd, 2013 at 11:46pm
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    Hey guys! Sorry that my chapter's been taking so long... I've been swamped with work! Hopefully I'll get it up this weekend
    September 24th, 2013 at 12:12am
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    @ She Said Poptarts
    Why thank you =)

    We should most definitely start an outline, I think the next chapter should be everyone finally arriving, meeting, getting to know each other ect, ect. And I think someone arriving a day late is a good idea actually.

    As for what they could do, well there's a pool right so maybe they can play chicken and someone gets a little too aggressive and get's hurt? IDK just an idea. Um, oh maybe they go hiking and a couple of them get lost for a night?

    And the arguments...hmm, not too sure what those could be about really.
    September 25th, 2013 at 12:38am
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    Dude, I'm totally up for the 'getting lost during hiking' idea! I can see them blaming each other, like maybe Louis can be like, "Hey! Lets go this way!" And they get lost, and and someone could be like, "This is your fault, blaah."

    The bickering could start between different couples before the clashing starts against their counterparts, maybe? We probably need to talk about that too.. because they could be freakishly the same, but somethings will be different... yeah? Because I'm totally stumped with the arguments between them as well.

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    September 25th, 2013 at 04:25am
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    Well since I write last I can come late and the hike could happen before Logahn if you guys want and then she gets here and gets in a fight with Zayn. I was thinking that they really don't like each other. And Marissa are we still going with Logahn ends up with Harry first and you end up with Liam? It's fine if we don't.

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    September 26th, 2013 at 09:41pm
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    If you're going to be late, then you'd have to be like days late. 'cause the rest of the girls and guys gotta settle in before someone has the hiking idea.. Right? I think I'll have one of the guys get annoyed with Izzy on the hiking trip, because I think she'd be the most girliest and is like, "I gotta bring this, and this! OMG! A bug! My hair, I need hairspray." And one of the guys could be like, "this is a hiking trip!"

    Anyways, since I'm the third writer, aka, the middle... Should I be the one to be like, "Most of us have been here for a day, Loghan had some trouble on the way (...)" kind of idea? To move the story along.

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    September 26th, 2013 at 11:08pm
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    Sounds good to me like Logahn is 3 days late maybe so her hyper self has only 4 days of manipulation destruction and possibly starting a fling with Harry
    September 27th, 2013 at 01:02am
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    Okay so in the third chap the hiking could be suggested and possiblt start and the fourth chapter could be nothing but the trip maybe? Then Logahn gets to the house 3 days late. Then we have about 4 days or so to wotk with in the house. I was thinking the second day takes place in the third chapter and the part of the fourth and goes into day four and the rest of day four is chapter five. That covers each girls first chapter. Then we have 3 more days in the chapter that could be one day per chapter until chapter nine which would start tour. Then we need to figure out what happens on tour dates. I know in the house we have planned a few things so we need to figure out how we incorporate those. If Marissas and my plan goes through then basically I was thinking Logahn and Harry have a 'thing' and it causes tension. As for the arguments, personalities clash and our charaters could each have a pet peeve that clashes with another member. Most girls live to create drama or just end up creating it even though they dont want it. I feel at least two of characters would love to create drama. I know Logahn will lile to create drama. We just need to start brainstorming.

    Edit:
    I know we discussed three chapters in the house but I feel like more can happen on tour. I also have a slight idea for tour also if you guys would like to hear it.

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    October 6th, 2013 at 12:07am
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    OK.. so if we were to put it in a chapter outline

    in the house
    Chapter 1: (Crystel) - Kitty arrives and meets Zayn and Louis.
    Chapter 2: (Corie) - Cam arrives second last, introduces girls, and meets all boys? (if you haven't started the chapter Corie, you can do this. Or if you have, ignore this, and maybe send a bit of what you're writing)
    Chapter 3: (Calli) - Introduce Izzy. Second day with the boys, a call from Loghan about a delay, and someone suggests a hike when asked 'what to do now'?
    Chapter 4: (Marissa) - The packing, and the trip to wherever the hike takes place. (should there be a night out, 'cause they get lost?)
    Chapter 5: (Ema) - Loghan finally arrives, and gets in the middle of the little tiff from the hike?
    Chapter 6: (Crystel) -
    Chapter 7: (Corie) - another fight/argument
    Chapter 8: (Calli) - the girls come to an agreement to get along with the boys so they won't get 'kicked off the tour.
    Chapter 9: (Marissa) - Tour starts.
    on tour
    Chapter 10: (Ema)
    ....
    Please, feel free to change anything about your chapter!

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    October 6th, 2013 at 12:28am
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    Well in my chapter I was thinking of having my small fling with Harry or sleeping with Harry whatever you want to call it and it causes issues idk and chapter ten could have something with her and Harry fixing whatever needs to be fixed.

    Edit: the hike I was thinking is part day three part day four

    And chapter ten could be whatever flows from chap nine idk
    October 6th, 2013 at 12:32am
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    Wait, so you get there.. and immediately get into fling with Harry? You don't want a day or two in between?
    October 6th, 2013 at 12:33am